October 2008  Issue #10
Carline Anglade-Cole CopyStar E-Zine
Carline Anglade-Cole
Carline Anglade-Cole
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It's copywriting - not copy the writing! 
 
Hiya CopyStar,
          
I just had a long talk with one of my clients.
 
Turns out he's refusing to rent his mailing list to several other companies. Why?
 
Because he's tired of finding HIS copy in the pages of his competitor's promotions!
 
Yep, his competitors are hiring copywriters (and paying them serious moolah!) who are doing nothing more than COPYING from my client's successful promotions - many of which were written by yours truly! Now, that sucks on many levels:
 
Level One: The client is getting screwed. He's paying a lot of money for the writer to deliver original copy - and getting nothing but swiped copy.
 
Level Two: The original writer is getting screwed out of royalties. After all, SHE wrote the copy in the first place - so SHE should get paid for it!
 
Level Three: The knock-off copywriter is making money from stealing!
 
Level Four:  That lousy, no good so-and-so is giving the copywriting business a bad rap!
 
That just stinks!

So I thought I'd use this issue to not only vent - but to make sure you don't get caught up in this racket. Because the truth is - if you steal someone else's copy - you're putting the nails in your own coffin. Here's why...
 
This is a VERY small industry. Copywriters talk to each other. Designers talk to copywriters. Business owners talk to each other. It won't be long before you get caught - and your career goes down in the toilet!
 
Case in point - no kidding this really happened to me!

Not too long ago,  I was reading a promo that came in the mail. The more I read the copy, the more it "sounded" familiar. After a while, I could even predict what was coming next. As I kept reading, lo and behold - there were special reports that I distinctly remember creating the titles to. After a while, I knew it wasn't a coincidence. I looked to see who the mailer was and it turned out to be an old client.
 
So, I called the client and said, "hey, just checking to see when I'm going to get my royalty check."
 
He didn't have a clue what I was talking about.
 
Then I told him about the knock-off package. He said he was shocked. He wanted to talk to the copywriter to find out what the heck was going on.
 
Now, here's where you need a little background info, CopyStar: The client hired and paid me to write the package. Due to some internal problems, they decided to kill the product. Six months or so later, they fixed the problems with the product, hired another copywriter and gave him my original package as "background" info.
 
That background info ended up on the foreground - as the theme of the new package - using the same premiums I created -  and lifting chunks of my copy!
 
Have I used the word SUCKS lately?
 
Anyway, to make a long story short - the copywriter denied lifting my copy and said it was purely coincidence that we came up with the same theme. Poppycock!
 
Yeah, I thought about suing the client - and even consulted a lawyer. He felt I had a case  but I decided not to waste any more of my time - or make the lawyer rich. However, I did let the client know if anyone ever asked me about his company - I would openly share my experience.
 
Turns out several copywriters - and designers - have called me, They knew I worked with the client and they were considering working with him. After I told them what happened to me - they backed off and to my knowledge - NONE of them accepted an assignment from the client! And get this...
 
Six months after that awful experience, one of the client's own employees called to offer me a job. I simply told him I didn't work with unethical people - and he should ask his boss for any further clarification. Then I kindly hung up the phone.
 
So what are some lessons you can learn from my experience, CopyStar?
 
LOTS! So listen up...
Lesson #1: Study the masters - but don't steal the copy! You can learn a whole lot about writing style...powerful themes...and grab 'em by the eyeball headlines when you study controls. I highly encourage that type of learning. In fact, on my website, I have a Control Depot where you can purchase real controls that are working right now - as well as some classics that stood the test of time: click here! 
 
But the point is to study them: Figure out what makes them work. Get the feel of the copy - and imitate the style! A copywriter who steals copy is a soon-to-be out of work copywriter with a bad rep! I don't want that to happen to you!
 
Lesson #2: Look and see what's currently working in the market! Again, the controls in my Control Depot are packages that are working right now! For example, skepticism is a huge hot button.
 
I think I did a great job tapping into the skeptical market with my smokin' hot new control: Why: CoQ10, Garlic, Lutein, Gingko, Calcium, Bilberry, Probiotics, Vitamin C, Magnesium, Chondroitin, Glucosamine, Low-fat diets, Omega 3 fish oil, grape seed extract, Blood pressure drugs, Weight-loss supplements and Cholesterol-lowering drugs Won't Work! (Phew! That was a mouthful, huh?)
 
You can see that package at: click here! It's a great example of tapping into the skeptical market. Read it and look for the hot buttons I pushed. Get the gist of the package - and then write YOUR OWN skeptical package. You can do it!
 
Ok, here's another example: Testimonial leads. Starting off your promo with a great story is an almost guarantee that you'll snatch up your reader's curiosity and get him salivating for more. I did that in my package "I hope my dad's story can save many others..." You can see it at: click here!
 
If you're struggling to understand how to write a testimonial-driven package - that sucker is a great example! Again, study it - trust me, it's not hard. Soon you'll be writing YOUR OWN testimonial package!
 
Plus, on my Control Depot, I've got great examples of how to gross out your prospect (the liver face guy)... shock your prospect with a surprising truth (cholesterol-lowering drug promo)... make an old product seem new (The NEW Chelation Miracle)... and much more. If you haven't checked out my Control Depot lately, do it now: click here! 
 
Lesson #3: Don't be lazy. You've heard the saying, "Give a man a fish and you feed him for a day. But teach a man to fish and you feed him for a lifetime", right?
 
Well, I'm here to teach you to fish. Make the time to learn the art of copywriting. Don't get lazy and just snatch a fish here and there. Because guess what? One day there won't be a person handing out fish - then whaddaya gonna do? While I'm still in the mood to write these ezines - let me show you how to fish. That way you'll be fishing (and writing your own copy) for decades to come!
 
Lesson #4: Respect the industry and yourself. Make it your goal to be known as a reputable copywriter. A person who puts in the work to do a good job for his clients. That way you won't have to dread the day when you get a phone call from a client questioning whether you wrote the copy or not (and trust me, that day WILL come!) Your reputation in this industry will determine if you fizzle - or sizzle! I want you to stand the test of time and be among the sizzlin' hot veterans of this noble trade. The choice is yours.
 
Ok, that's it - no more lecturing!

I've got big dreams for you CopyStar - so don't get cut at the knees by falling into the trap of those unscrupulous writers. Learn your trade. Be original. And write kick-butt copy that's all YOURS!
The Copywriting Boot Camp on Steroids is STILL causing an uproar!

Man, you won't believe how many calls I've gotten to speak at private seminars in the past week! People are hearing about the success we had at the Copywriting Boot Camp on Steroids and these companies want me to teach their staff how to write kick-butt copy too!
 
I've turned down most of the requests. Why? Because I HAVE A JOB - I'm a copywriter, remember? :-)
 
But there is one speaking engagement I did agree to attend. And that's the annual AWAI Fast Track to Copywriting Success Boot Camp. Those folks do a class act. And they've invited me and Graphic Designer Lori Haller to team up and put together an extended version of our Oprah presentation.
 
If you were at the Copywriting Boot Camp on Steroids - you know that Oprah thingy we did was a BLAST - and now, we get to do it again! Woo hoo!
 
By the way, the AWAI boot camp is officially sold out. But Denise Ford - AWAI's seminar guru - agreed to let my CopyStar readers get in through "the special door".
 
So if you still want to attend - just call TOLL FREE 1-866-879-2924 and let the nice customer service representative know you're one of Carline Anglade-Cole's CopyStar readers - and you want in! They'll MAKE room for you - I promise! I just love POWER, don't you?
 
If you want to read more about the AWAI boot camp - just click here!
 
And the attendees are STILL ON CLOUD NINE!

I gotta share this story with you. Dan G. was one of our Copywriting Boot Camp on Steroids attendees - and I really picked on him. Why?
 
First of all, he showed up LATE to the boot camp. The nerve!
 
Then he confessed that he lost his "mojo for copywriting". A man without a mojo - how could I resist teasing him?
 
And finally, it became crystal clear that Dan lacked focus and structure in his writing.
 
So I got on him during the entire boot camp - and at his private, 30-minute conversation!
 
Was Dan mad at me? HARDLY! Here's what he recently wrote me...
 
Hey Carline,
 
I enjoyed the new Copystar Ezine talking about the bootcamp. I hope you had a few days to rest up.
 
You deserve it! I thought you might be interested in hearing this...

Since returning home, I'm back on my schedule of getting up early (for me, early is 8 AM!) and writing first thing in the morning.

To "ease back in" without putting too much pressure I set an initial goal of only one hour a day, every day.

Something interesting is happening though... After the first day, one hour flew by... and I was actually ENJOYING it.

I'm increasing my writing time every day and it doesn't feel like agony... like it was before the bootcamp. I've started on 3 new promotions and it's fun again.

And I think I'm cranking out some pretty good stuff. But I'll let you be the judge of that when I send you my bootcamp DVD landing page assignment. And NO... you won't have to wait until 2012 to get it. :)

Anyhoo... just a quick little update to let you know my motivation wasn't just a temporary thing that died out after the boot camp. I've actually taken this newfound motivation and put it into ACTION. I owe you big
THANKS for that.

All the best,

Dan

I couldn't let Dan off the hook, so here's what I wrote him back...

Yeah Dan!
 
Now, let's set this new goal: Start working 1 hour earlier (7am) and only work on something that will make you money during that hour. Watch what happens!
 
Thanks for the update!
 
Carline

And lo and behold, I got this immediate response:

Great idea! I will start this tomorrow... and I know exactly what I need to work on in that hour.
 
Thanks!
 
Dan
Can't wait to see what Dan comes up with!

And what about you CopyStar - what's holding you back? Do you need a swift kick in the pants like Dan? Are you still straddling the fence deciding if copywriting is really for you? Are you a scaredy cat? Are you frustrated that you can't nail that first client?
 
If so, keep reading the issues of CopyStar - I just may be able to help you reach your copywriting dreams - sooner than you think!
Yours for stellar results,

Carline

Carline Anglade-Colebr /> Million-Dollar Copywriter & Consultant

P.S. Wow! When I decided to GIVE AWAY my new Oprah promotion - I didn't realize how many folks would download it! Man, if that promo was on my Control Depot for sale - I would've made an easy 50 grand! Drats! Just kidding - I really do want you to have the Oprah promo for FREE.
 
If you haven't gotten your copy yet - click here! Just so you know, when I put Oprah on my control depot - you'll have to pay for the promo - so get it while it's FREE!
 
P.P.S: Guess what CopyStar, October 8th is my 25th wedding anniversary! Yes, I got married when I was 2 :-)! So I want to take this time to give a big SMOOCH to my hunny and inspiration Mickey Cole! I LOOOOOVVVVEEE YOU, Mr. "Yum Yum"!  


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